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And then she took the person out of her, and placed it beside herself.

And gazing at the stars, she set herself free.

The night dimmed, and the stars sprinkled star dust.

She was now to treat herself right.


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  1. Hardi17 September 2014 at 09:53

    This spoke for me and it's beautiful!

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  2. LL17 September 2014 at 09:56

    Freedom is only valid if you allow yourself to participate in it.

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  3. Amrit Sinha17 September 2014 at 10:01

    "And then she took the person out of her, and placed it beside herself." - Beautiful use of words :-)

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  4. Shadow17 September 2014 at 13:40

    Perfect, so very perfect. The night and the moon, dreams and desires, should be followed lest you lose yourself....

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  5. Launna 17 September 2014 at 16:17

    I did the same thing recently... I am working on taking 'him' out of me o I can treat myself right... this is beautiful...

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  6. MunirGhiasuddin17 September 2014 at 17:16

    Beautiful writing indeed. Also beautiful and strong emotions. Great post. Thanks for sharing.

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  7. AVY19 September 2014 at 03:13

    A good start, if there is such a thing as denying who you really are, or trying to be.

    /Avy

    http://mymotherfuckedmickjagger.blogspot.com

    ♥

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  8. Y25 September 2014 at 09:44

    Setting herself free.

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  9. Ghadeer30 September 2014 at 00:00

    "Took the person out of her"
    I love that phrase. It's true that we are tapestries of all the people we meet and experiences we go through. It's challenging (but v liberating!) when we can free ourselves of the negative bits by literally 'taking them out of us'

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