Abandoning me.

As we treaded across the lands of the world maker,  he asked to sit and listen for a while.
The next step is to abandon yourself.
I gazed at the sunless sky, wondering what it could mean.
That's when the one I could trust told the story of the boy who gave up the use of pronouns - I, me, my!
Be selfless my heart whispered.

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  1. I try..so hard!! Hope one I will be!

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  2. You write from the heart and with so much emotion.... I hope you always write♡

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  3. Such a beautiful truth...spoken in a beautiful way....love this!!

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  4. Linda imagen Saludos
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  5. :) The hardest thing to do!

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  6. I wish I could believe that, I really do, but the times I tried to be selfless are the times when other people hurt me the most. Now I'm just cynical.

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  7. like the sun picture

    did you hear about the breakfast prayer..

    Take Care

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  8. I love that last line, so perfect ~

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  9. This is beautiful. An instant favourite. :)

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  10. Love this. <3 Stated perfectly.

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  11. So touching! loved it completely... <3
    Keep writing!

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