Loneliness.

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Take a person out of dungeons. 

Show her the flowers, the sun and the moon.

Show her an existence in search of a better version of truth.

Show her that you could be anything, anything in this messed up world!

And when she's something worth herself, leave. 

Blame time, 'cause that's a better excuse.

I hope you realize that leaving in first place, had made it the dungeon. 

But who cares. 

You could fall in hatred too, like in love.
But the worst part is, you could not hate anything as much as you could hate yourself.
Welcome to a world that has no exit gates.

Comments

  1. Launna 16 March 2016 at 00:02

    Your writing always speaks to me... 'he' showed me a beautiful way... one of love, then he left... I had to find the beauty myself, it's been a long road. You're right that you can't hate anything as much as hate yourself sometimes...

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  2. Red Handed16 March 2016 at 00:03

    Sometimes you remain outside the dungeon even after he leaves, believing that may be his purpose in your life was restricted to only that.

    I loved this.

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  3. Mich16 March 2016 at 07:47

    This makes me think of Tool's lyrics, "I will work to elevate you just enough to bring you down." Powerful stuff. <3

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  4. Devilish Angel16 March 2016 at 09:42

    For a change why cann't U take a person out of his dungeon?

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  5. dianne16 March 2016 at 19:16

    The words resonate within me...yes, he shows me the flowers, the sun and the moon and how wonderful my life can be with him in it...and then he leaves. Leaves me to wonder and back to my loneliness.
    Wonderful words!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  7. Lux G.19 March 2016 at 13:48

    Wow, girl. Your words are amazing. And I do understand how it is. Taking you out of the dungeon and showing you beautiful things and then leaving you and bringing you back to the dungeon again. A different one.

    You're a wonderful writer.

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  8. MunirGhiasuddin23 March 2016 at 03:33

    Beautiful writing. Strangely though as beautiful as it is in writing, I do not wish these circumstances to any one at all.
    I hope that all is well. with you.

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  9. Susan Kane30 March 2016 at 08:06

    But the worst part is, you could not hate anything as much as you could hate yourself.
    Welcome to a world that has no exit gates.

    Such meaningful and profound writing. I have spent years in this zone. God, family, and determination pulled me out this pit.

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  10. shortybear4 April 2016 at 21:15

    awesome

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