The Blurred Future.

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A part of me doesn't know that accident happened. A part of me believes there was a future.

As I opened the door to the entrance of his house, I saw him washing his Car. Within those dusty clothes and sweaty face he gave a smile of those shiny dimples. He was now a grown man. The one with a french beard, long face, military haircut, worked up arms and the lost smile. Everything made me fall for him. His love for me was still the same, at least I liked to believe that. Still opening the door for me, making sure everything I did involved minimum possible risk and maximum possible affection by him.

As I headed to sit by and give him the hug before leaving for my trip aboard, I wanted to seal the time and moment right then, in that smiling face. In those glittering eyes that belonged to him, yet belonged to me.

In that dream, he came forward told me he was coming along and everything went right.
But we aren't dreaming right? 

This part of me always says, I want to tell you the truth, but I don't want you to know it. At least, not yet. And Time, I've stopped counting on you.



Comments

  1. Nuha Nasim18 May 2013 at 01:38

    Sigh.

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  2. Launna 18 May 2013 at 01:39

    I love those kind of dreams where everything is as it should be... those are the one's I don't want to wake up from :/

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  3. 21 Wits18 May 2013 at 06:23

    Absolutely, and if only we could pick up where we left off in our next dream! Excellent piece, you brought me right there too!

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  4. Momina18 May 2013 at 09:46

    Time can betray you when it comes to it. I rarely dream and every time I visit your blog you leave me in awe with your profound dreams and the way you pen them down.

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  5. Red Handed18 May 2013 at 12:35

    beautiful.....sometimes we wish dreams came true.....

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  6. Red Handed18 May 2013 at 12:35

    SIGH! Beautiful. soemtimes we wish...if only dreams came true

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  7. Optimistic Existentialist18 May 2013 at 18:30

    I would give anything if we were somehow able to record our dreams and play them back in the future so that we could enjoy, re-experience, analyze, etc.

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  8. LuLu18 May 2013 at 20:39

    "And Time, I've stopped counting on you."

    You're on to something here. Time can be counted on to move forward, with or without you. That is all.

    xx
    LuLu
    Breakfast After 10

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  9. Ryan18 May 2013 at 21:23

    I really enjoyed that writing.

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  10. Karan19 May 2013 at 11:52

    A perfect read for a bright Sunday morning . Dreaming in dreams

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  11. Anonymous19 May 2013 at 21:33

    wow. Beautiful

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  12. rudraprayaga22 May 2013 at 00:28

    If dreams come true the universe will be a different entity.Nice imagination.

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  13. Unknown22 May 2013 at 13:09

    A nice write up on a dream. Very imaginative and emotional. Loved reading it.

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  14. Brian Miller22 May 2013 at 17:51

    it is nice when reality feels like a dream, or that dreams become reality...i am living my dream in some sense...

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  15. TexWisGirl22 May 2013 at 21:35

    nicely written.

    thanks for stopping in!

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  16. Cloudia22 May 2013 at 21:58

    Keep writing! Did you notice the link to my Kindle eBook at my blog?
    Hope to see you again soon :-)


    Aloha

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  17. Merely Me22 May 2013 at 23:54

    ...military haircut, worked up arms and the lost smile.
    'He' always grows up in this fashion.
    Well interpreted dream.

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  18. Melissa Sydie23 May 2013 at 02:33

    Intriguing piece, makes me want to know more. Eloquently expressed.

    http://loislennon.blogspot.com/

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  19. Alcina23 May 2013 at 10:33

    There are times when you really wish for your dreams to come true.I loved the imagery you set in here.Don't stop counting the time may turn in favor anytime :)

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  20. Grace24 May 2013 at 03:04

    The dream is always about the dreamer ~ And the proper time will come, if its meant to be or its meant for you ~

    Have a lovely day ~

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  21. Talitha24 May 2013 at 14:29

    'Tis lovely indeed but nope,we aren't dreaming.
    Sad truth.
    But I love how lucidly you manage to tell the story.

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  22. SandyCarlson25 May 2013 at 07:10

    Dreams tell us who we are. I really enjoyed this.

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  23. DWei25 May 2013 at 13:22

    I wish my dreams were this meaningful.

    Instead I run around like a maniac and jump off buildings.

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  24. Raj25 May 2013 at 23:37

    the face will change. the dimples might. the car may get longer or smaller. the smile may change.

    but the truth wont. this dream, will beecome a reality, but u l probably be cuter and wiser by then as will everything else. u knw that.

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  25. Karan26 May 2013 at 19:35

    This had be thinking . And thinking a lot . A nice share.

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  26. rudraprayaga12 June 2013 at 11:49

    Good dream.

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  27. Unknown13 June 2013 at 21:21

    Very well done!

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